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I wrote a story :) For english class ><

Wed Sep 30, 2009, 9:11 AM
Well its got no real title, but its for original writing piece and so I named it "Dream world Original writing piece"

Gasp! My body sprang up like a fully tuned Jack in a box. Eyes widened. What is this? Where am I? Am I dreaming? Is this heaven?

As I pondered this, I got to my feet. The landscape around me was all the same, just fields. Many unusual plants around me. To count all the types would be as hard as counting all the stars in the sky. I put my hands in eyes sight. Panic ensued, my hands weren't the original colour they were, they're a metallic like grey. But as soon as the panic started to take over a feeling of calm took over, I couldn't explain it, I shouldn't have felt calm. It must be the fields. This place feels so perfect, not even an ounce of despair can take over. I decided to lie down.

Lying in the field, time passed, hours, days, who knows? It just occurred to me, I was alone. Could this be hell? Have a perfect world but have no one to share it with? I wished for company, and all of a sudden.

As I wished for company it happened! A city was appearing around me, phasing into reality. The buildings were made of a shiny rock, perhaps marble, very beautiful, and as the buildings appeared, and as the buildings appeared, so did the people. Hundreds! Thousands! Filling the streets. But that's when I noticed something, they all looked like me. Was individuality gone? I began to think of this, but the thought just vanished out of my head, I couldn't even remember it. I began to walk around.

Walking around the city I seemingly conjured with a whim, I noticed something. This place seemed familiar. Like as if I had been here as a child, but how is this possible? I just made this city moments ago, I started to try and remember my life before, but as I did the memories started to fade. The stronger I try to remember, the more it slipped away, the memory was gone.

What was I just thinking about? Ah, what ever it was, it mustn't have been important to just let me forget like that. I carried on down the street, looking at the tall cloud breaking buildings in awe, and the tiny little shops with an urge to buy all what I saw.

Carrying on looking at every I passed, until. I got to the end of the shopping street. My arms were heavy, I looked down at them. Bags! Filled with all I wanted! Did my wishes come true? I thought the city was just a fluke, but this made me sure. I could have anything I ever wanted! When ever I wanted! I began to spree around the city! Going to every place I could, doing what ever I could!


Many hours passed


Sat on a park bench, I stopped to think about the day I just had. All my wishes came true, in just today, I was able to: Have unimaginable wealth, what ever I wanted was mine; I found true love, she's sat right next to me now, even though she looks like everyone else, her personality was all I ever wanted; An island getaway in a distant ocean, able to get there without the annoying flights, and back within a afternoon; And after all of that, just sit relaxing in the most comfortable chair I have ever had the privilege of sitting in. It was heaven.

But then I realized. I could do this everyday, at the start it sounded amazing, all of this everyday, but my smile was short lived. Was this all I wanted? All these rewards and no work, life of a rich man. It's not what I wanted, not at all. I want to work for what I get, the feeling of a well earned meal, and a wife not as perfect as this girl I met here, as I love her faults. Morphine trying to set in, but my urge was to strong, and it was pushed back.

Feeling all my emotions rush back into my body, anxiety, anger, sadness. Normally not wanted by the average person, but it was like my medicine, healing me from this place. I stood up, and shouted, almost like a command to all around me. "Get me out of here! I want this to end!"

The echo of my command quietened. Will this wish come true? Suddenly, everywhere around me. It all started to melt! Ooze into nothingness! I embraced this with glee, and I faded away into nothing

  • Mood: Irritated
  • Listening to: Breaking Benjamin - Dance with the devil
  • Reading: My story (as I write it)
  • Watching: Nothing
  • Playing: Nothing
  • Eating: Ice cream, which has melted
  • Drinking: Milk

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  • Current Residence: Frome
  • Interests: Cosplay, Games, Websites and Computers
  • Favourite movie: Watchmen, Bruno
  • Favourite band or musician: Skillet, Breaking Benjamin, Slipknot
  • Favourite genre of music: Metal, Rock
  • Operating System: Vista
  • MP3 player of choice: None
  • Favourite game: Half life 2 or World of Warcraft
  • Favourite gaming platform: PC
  • Favourite cartoon character: If this counts anime then Ulquiorra Cifer and Hollow Ichigo
  • Tools of the Trade: Keyboard

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:iconmetalchristian33:
Hi Nathan Hogan.

It's Daniel James from school. =D

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